http://www.baltimoresun.com/health/bal-md.hypertension01jun01,0,7828853.story - link
The lead shows a proper example of a real person affected.
The nutgraf doesn't appear until the third paragraph and also shows why people should care about the rising rates of obesity in children. There are quotes and facts littered throughout the first page.
The only problem with this story is that it doesn't draw back to the protagonist until the second page. The last two paragraphs draw back to the main idea.
6/5/09
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